The H scenes were written extremely well. I just didn't notice because everything just felt too natural.
The pacing was so smooth that while I was writing notes for this review, I had to stop and think, "Man, what really happened? I don't think much has changed since x happened besides y." However, I would then realize that while I was distracted by the building romance, there were other things going on, or while I was absorbed in the action scenes, the characters would break through to some important detail. Ugh I hope this author has more works because I'm such a fan of this one! <